Posted by Narrauko
on 8/13/2003, 8:19 am, in reply to "Re: first part"
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Good story...even though I've only read the first part, It's pretty interesting. One problem though...lots of typos and mispelled words. Normally that doesn't really bother me, but when it screws up the meaning and makes the story hard to follow without reading the same line over and over again.. it kinda gets on my nerves.
i.e. " I call a pawn those forces subject to me come forth and share my pain so thy purpose shall be to rid to rid us of our pain....
See what I mean? Anyway...good story. later
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