Posted by Sofie on 6/28/2004, 3:36 am I started checking the pages for mistakes. I also would like to say that these are just suggestive or possible changes. If you like the text or anything like it is and you find that there isn't anything in my comments than don't afraid to just dismiss them. http://www.geocities.com/slaikjaer/margrethe2.html http://www.geocities.com/slaikjaer/margrethe3.html Here is a list of women having an anchor brooch. http://www.geocities.com/slaikjaer/margrethe6.html This diamond and pearl botton brooch did not start life as a brooch. The diesign is a big pearl in the middle surrounded by 2 rows of diamonds one bigger and one smaller. You see that most of the mistakes are small typing mistakes and shouldn't take you long to fix. Some others are just suggestions to make the text sound nicer, and if you don't want to change it on the page, no hard feelings. Next time I'll check the Crown Princess's pages! But I guess that once Margerethe is done, most of the work is also done...
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Hi Glenn,
I've only done Queen Margarethe's pages so far... I'll do it in parts because I need to stay focused and I can't do that all the time!
Margarethe page 2
This beautiful diamond necklace was a personal gift to Queen Margrethe from King Fahd of Saudia Arabia and she recieved it during an official visit to the country in the1980's.
>There needs to be a split between 'the' and '1980's'
Margethe page 3
This long pearl necklace with gold and rudy lock, Queen Ingrid inherited from her mother, and now it is worn by Queen Margrethe, who share the nickname "Daisy" with her Swedish grandmother.
(Private jewellery)
>Shouldn't it read that she 'shares' the nickname "Daisy with her Swedish grandmother?
Queen Margrethe, Queen Anne-Marie (gift from King Constatine), Princess Benedikte (gift from private), Princess Elisabeth (Queen Alexandrine's) and Countess Anne-Dorte (gift from Count Christian who inherited it from his mother Princess Caroline-Mathilde, who had recieved it from her husband.
>Should there be another ')' at the end?
Margarethe page 6
It consists of 3 netural pearls set in a modern frame made of gold and diamonds.
>Shouldn't it read '3 natural pearls'?
It was the lock of a pearl necklace given as a wedding present to later Queen Lovisa of Denmark.
>Should it read 'the later Queen Lovisa of Denmark'?
>Shouldn't it be 'design'?
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