I read your poem last night. Good poem, (but) when I went to bed I dreamed I was on a roller coaster with ups and downs. big loopy loos and scary scary turns! I could have had a heart attack. I'm blaming it all on you! :-)
So the next time you write a poem and give me a heart attack. Could you please make it about something like Bob hits the lottery and becomes a zillionair. Well that or Bob goes to a Dolly Parton concert and her top falls off! :-)
~ Bob ~